Much more appealing and expressive of the Dream Cleaners charm, Molly, though personally, I'd lose the old Flossy sheet (because she no longer relates to your final line-up), and also the environment image, because I think that's a confusion of your 'message' (i.e. toy design/character designer). Instead, I think you should include some of Alistair's colour ways, and consider concluding your slide show with a specially created ensemble of your cast of characters as final colour choices etc.
(I'd also consider giving your page-layouts a bit more margin all the way around, as I wouldn't want any cropping happening - some of your images feel very close to the edge and feel a bit cramped to my eye).
Much more appealing and expressive of the Dream Cleaners charm, Molly, though personally, I'd lose the old Flossy sheet (because she no longer relates to your final line-up), and also the environment image, because I think that's a confusion of your 'message' (i.e. toy design/character designer). Instead, I think you should include some of Alistair's colour ways, and consider concluding your slide show with a specially created ensemble of your cast of characters as final colour choices etc.
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Okay, cool! Thanks Phil, I'll get on it :D
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